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The Moltinian Story
QuontexDate: Sunday, 08.03.2015, 10:18 | Message # 1
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I have been meaning to finish this for some time but I have been busy, So I am releasing this as a 'part 1'. Please tell me what you think as feedback is welcomed(as long as it's constructive).

A legend for Moltinian words in the story.
Taal = Galaxy
Ioth = Planet
Xia/Tiaal/Siziac/Etc. = Numbering/Designation

~ 1760 Words







Edited by Quontex - Sunday, 29.03.2015, 13:19
 
DodecahedronDate: Sunday, 08.03.2015, 14:15 | Message # 2
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That's a very good story, but i have a question. Why would they leave a galaxy after a cataclysm on a single planet?




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QuontexDate: Sunday, 08.03.2015, 22:06 | Message # 3
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Quote Dodecahedron ()
Why would they leave a galaxy after a cataclysm on a single planet?

Well, They figured since their home world was destroyed they'd pick up and move. I'm going somewhere with this so I'd like to not give too much away.

And thanks for the feedback.







Edited by Quontex - Sunday, 08.03.2015, 22:07
 
DiscovererOfWorldsDate: Monday, 09.03.2015, 16:48 | Message # 4
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I like your story, but I do not like the intergalactic civilization that manage to accelerate their evolution, I would tell the story of a civilization with technology like ours, in a planet like ours, and as we know that their planet is just blue dot in the vastness of space.




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QuontexDate: Sunday, 29.03.2015, 13:15 | Message # 5
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Added a second chapter, Still working on this. I plan to have 2 or 3 more chapters before this is finished.




 
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